How To Write A Band 6 Module C Discursive Essay (New Syllabus)

The discursive essay is a new component of Module C: The Craft of Writing. In this article, we explain what a discursive essay is and give you a step-by-step process for writing one.

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Do you know what a discursive essay is? Do you know what makes it different from a persuasive essay? What does “discursive” even mean? If these questions have ever crossed, you’re not alone. But don’t worry! In this post, we’ll explain what a discursive essay is and how to write one worthy of a Band 6.

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What’s a discursive essay?

A discursive essay is a type of writing that explores multiple perspectives on a topic.

NESA defines discursive texts as:

Texts whose primary focus is to explore an idea or variety of topics. These texts involve the discussion of an idea(s) or opinion(s) without the direct intention of persuading the reader, listener or viewer to adopt any single point of view. Discursive texts can be humorous or serious in tone and can have a formal or informal register.

NESA adds that discursive essays can also include the following features:

  • Explores an issue or an idea and may suggest a position or point of view
  • Approaches a topic from different angles and explores themes and issues in a style that balances personal observations with different perspectives
  • Uses personal anecdotes and may have a conversational tone
  • Primarily uses first person although third person can also be used
  • Uses figurative language or may be more factual
  • Draws upon real-life experiences and/or draws from wide reading
  • Uses engaging imagery and language features
  • Begins with an event, an anecdote or a relevant quote that is then used to explore an idea
  • Resolution may be reflective or open-ended

When you write discursive essays, you will need to discuss ideas in this way.

But, don’t worry—it’s a lot more fun than it sounds. Let’s see why.

Why do I need to learn how to write “discursive essays”?

The 2019 HSC English Syllabus made significant changes to Module C.

Instead of just analysing texts, the new Module C: The Craft of Writing focuses on improving your writing skills.

To do this, the Module requires you to write in a variety of different modes:

  • Imaginative: Imaginative writing is creative writing. For example,  a short story or creative reimagining.
  • Persuasive: Persuasive writing persuades somebody of an idea or position. Most of the essays you produce for high school are persuasive essays.
  • Informative: Informative writing tries to inform people of facts and data. This may mean a report, but it could also include types of writing such as popular science or travel writing.
  • Discursive: Discursive writing explores an idea from several perspectives. It can be humorous or serious in tone.

NESA aims to make you a more confident and competent communicator, broadening your writing skills so they’re practical even beyond high school and the HSC.

 

What’s different about writing a discursive essay?

There are stylistic and structural differences between a discursive and a persuasive essay.

Most essays that you write in high school ask you to take a position on something and argue for it. Essentially, you’re being asked to persuade a reader of something; a theme, idea, or an idea’s connection to context.

In contrast, discursive essays don’t require you to take a particular position on something.

When you write a discursive essay, you can explore your topic from a few different perspectives. This gives you the opportunity to highlight the pros and cons, and see what others might think about the topic.

Discursive essays are also less rigid and formal than the standard persuasive essay you’re asked to write in other Modules. In a discursive essay, you can develop your own voice and style.

The following table shows the differences in forms:

Table: Comparison of Discursive and Persuasive Essays
DetailDiscursive EssayPersuasive Essay
Register of languageA mix of formal and informal languages with occasional colloquialismsFormal
Style and toneAim for an educated audience, but the tone and style can be friendly and more openly subjectiveAcademic, objective, and intellectual
Use of first-person pronounsFirst-person pronouns are fineFirst-person pronouns should be used cautiously and judiciously
Use of figurative devicesShould be used throughoutNot recommended
Use of evidence and examplesYes, but not in a T.E.E.L or P.E.E.L formatYes, consistently and in a particular format
StructureRequires an introduction, conclusion, and paragraphing.

Paragraph length can vary. There is no strict format.

Introduction, body paragraphs, conclusion.

Formal structure appropriate to the Module.

Consistent paragraph length throughout.

 

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So, does my opinion count?

When you’re writing an essay, your opinion always counts. Whether you’re writing a detailed persuasive essay for Module B or a discursive piece for a Module C assessment, your ideas and opinions are crucial.

The difference is how you present them. When you write a persuasive essay, there is the assumption that it is your voice and your opinion. So, teachers often say not to use personal pronouns because adding a stronger element of your personal voice will make your writing seem too subjective and, therefore, not as persuasive.

Personal pronouns in persuasive essays are also often seen as being tautological (saying something twice, which some see as a stylistic fault).

In contrast, in a discursive essay, you can take a more personal approach. For example, including personal anecdotes and your own strong voice can help add depth and insight to the perspectives you discuss.

 

What style should I take in a discursive essay?

Discursive essays are stylistically flexible compared to persuasive essays. They can be serious or they can be humorous.

They’re not a new style of writing – discursive essays were a very common form of writing during the Renaissance and Early Modern Period.

Mary Wollstonecraft, Charles Lamb, Elizabeth Barret Browning, Samuel Johnson, GK Chesterton, and Michel de Montaigne were all famous essayists in their time who wrote discursive texts as well as persuasive ones.

Over time, the discursive essay became less common than the persuasive essay. In our context, discursive writing is becoming more common again. Contemporary writers such as Zadie Smith, Helen Garner, John D’Agata, and Ta-Nesi Coates all have discursive essays among their work.

You’ll find examples of discursive writing in publications like:

 

Do I need to analyse evidence in a discursive essay?

You’ll need to provide evidence in your discursive essays, but not in the same sense as your persuasive writing.

The idea is to explore ideas or a variety of topics and to do this, you’ll have to present some evidence. But this won’t necessarily include literary analysis (although it might if you so choose).

You’re not writing T.E.E.L or P.E.E.L paragraphs or listing techniques and effects (not that you should ever simply list techniques and effects!).

Instead, you’ll be writing about ideas and maybe supporting these with quotations from other people, or anecdotes and reflections from your personal experience.

 

What structure should a discursive essay have?

In persuasive essays, you’ll use strict essay structures depending on whether you’re discussing one or more texts and the Module you’re studying. Your paragraphs should be consistent in length and have explicit signposting, such as topic sentences and linking sentences.

Discursive essays don’t have the same rigid structure or approach to signposting.

In a discursive essay, you may not be discussing texts, but rather ideas or things – for instance, an advertisement, political system, or a type of sneaker. This means that some paragraphs will need to be longer than others, depending on the idea you’re discussing.

In addition, because a discursive essay will want you to discuss things from an objective point of view, but also include your anecdotal experiences, you may find that your anecdotes are shorter than your discussion of ideas.

While you will need to introduce your ideas in the introduction and at the start of each paragraph, you won’t need to have formal thesis statements and topic sentences. After all, you’re trying to be more conversational and less formal.

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How do I plan and write a discursive essay?

Like any essay, you can follow a process to produce high-quality essays and make your life easier.

Let’s take a look at the steps Matrix students use.

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Flowchart: The steps to writing a discursive response

Writing a discursive essay, step-by-step

Now we’ll explore in-depth how to write a discursive essay. This process has the following steps:

  1. Brainstorm your ideas
  2. Research and develop your ideas
  3. Plan your response
  4. Begin writing your introduction
  5. Write the body of your discussion
  6. Finish by writing a conclusion
  7. Reread and proofread your first draft
  8. Write a second draft based on your notes and edits
  9. Third draft and submit

When you write a persuasive essay, you are given a specific question. With a discursive essay, you may not have a question at all. Instead, your discursive tasks might come in different forms:

    • A question: You are given a question and asked to answer it by discussing a topic or a variety of topics.
    • A topic: You are given a topic to explore.
    • A stimulus: You are given either a statement or image and must use that as the basis for your writing.

Because of the nature of discursive essays, you won’t be analysing and unpacking a question like you would for a persuasive essay. Instead, you’ll need to research and explore different ideas or subjects.

As with any essay, you must take the time to research and plan your work first. This is especially true if you are writing on a topic for the first time.

Step 1: Brainstorm your ideas

Before you start anything, you need to consider what you know about the topic.

Your first step is to create a mind map that lists what you know about the topic. Mind maps should list the aspects of the topic that you think are worth exploring.

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Step 2: Research and develop your ideas

Now that you’ve brainstormed ideas, it’s time to develop your ideas through research.

Fortunately, you have the power of the internet at your fingers. With your mind map as a guide, start researching the topics you’ve listed.

YouTube is a good place to start looking for basic information about subjects.

Make sure you try to use reputable sites. For example, a personal blog is not going to have the same level of trustworthiness as major news or academic websites.

Start by looking at the broad topic you find interesting, and then pick two or three aspects to consider in detail.

Don’t let your research get too out of hand. Keep your focus narrow enough to manage the word count (1000-1200 words), but wide enough to explore different viewpoints.

Some dos and don’ts:

  • Do – Follow the ideas that interest you
  • Don’t – Research too many different ideas
  • Do – Research different perspectives on your topic
  • Don’t – Settle for just one source
  • Do – Make note of useful sources, examples, and quotations for your response
  • Don’t – Skip out on doing research

Once you’ve researched your topic, you’re ready to start planning your essay.

Step 3: Plan your response

Even though a discursive essay lacks the formality of a persuasive response, you still need a logical structure.

This means you’ll need:

  • An introduction that orients your reader
  • A body with several paragraphs that explore your topic
  • A conclusion that summarises your discussion

Planning is important because it will help you structure your introduction and develop your ideas. Your introduction should briefly introduce the topic and why you’re going to talk about it.

When you plan, note down your ideas and think about how to best present them so the reader can easily follow. This means planning what you will discuss in each paragraph and what bits of evidence are going to best assist this.

Here’s a possible 4-part structure for the body of your essay:

  1. Introduce the topic or subject, expanding on your introduction
  2. Present one perspective on the issue
  3. Explore a different perspective
  4. Include a personal anecdote about the topic
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Flowchart: A discursive essay scaffold

Remember, this scaffold isn’t rigid. You could quite easily switch around where you put your anecdote. Or, rather than exploring different perspectives in different paragraphs, you may want to contrast these views in the same paragraph. In a discursive essay, you have flexibility.

Now you’ve planned everything, you’re set to start writing.

Don’t feel ready to write yet? Do you need to see an exemplary discursive essay to see what you should be doing?

Read a sample response, here.

Step 4: Write your introduction

The introduction of a discursive responsive is different to other essays in that you don’t have a formal thesis statement and thematic framework.

Instead, you can ask questions to introduce the topic or use an anecdote to frame the topic. You also don’t need to lay out a roadmap of how your essay will unfold, so you can spend time explaining your interest in the topic.

Some effective ways to start discursive essays are:

  • Ask a question – Questions force your audiences to consider what they know about a subject.
  • Use an anecdote – Personal experience can create reliability with the reader because they can see how another human engages with an idea.
  • An example – Examples allow readers to develop a clear understanding of what the subject is and how they feel about it.

The length of your introduction can vary. As you’re not trying to explain the structure of your argument, you can focus on introducing the topic in the manner you find most engaging.

 

Step 5: Write the body of your discussion

This is where your planning comes in handy. When you’re writing the body of your discursive response, you want to think about the order of information your reader needs to make sense of your discussion. So, use your planning notes to structure your body paragraphs.

While you don’t need a topic sentence per se, you need to get to the subject of the paragraph within the first couple of sentences. You can vary the length of your paragraphs to suit the amount of material you want to discuss.

Some useful rules for writing your paragraphs:

  • Use clear and direct language – avoid the passive form
  • Employ a conversational and accessible tone
  • Use language suited to an educated audience
  • Vary your sentence length
  • Support your points with examples and quotations about your topic
  • Employ rhetorical techniques and literary devices to convey your ideas (check out our Essential Guide to English Techniques if you need inspiration)
  • Use anecdotes to connect with your audience
  • Include pop culture and intertextual references that will help your reader follow your ideas
  • Use first and second-person pronouns:
    • “You” to refer to the reader or people in general
    • “I” to introduce your perspectives and experiences
  • When finishing one paragraph and moving to another, orient the reader. For example, “While that one perspective, that’s not the only perspective.”

 

Step 6: Write a conclusion

Your conclusion should summarise and tie things together.

You don’t need to follow the rigid formula of :

  1. Restate thesis
  2. Reiterate themes
  3. Make a statement about your experience of studying the Module

Instead, you need to tie together the various perspectives that you’ve looked at in your essay.

Remember, the point of a discursive essay is to explore a subject from different perspectives (and not persuade a single perspective).

Because of this, you want to take your reader back through the different perspectives you’ve encountered. Perhaps you might present the perspective on a matter you hold – for example, “Yes, I do prefer dark chocolate to white chocolate, but that doesn’t mean that white chocolate is not without its uses, benefits, or zealots.”

Once you’ve finished your conclusion…

Congratulations!

You’ve finished your first draft. Now you’re ready to proofread and edit it to produce a second draft.

 

Step 7: Reread and edit your first draft

Once you’ve completed your first draft, put it aside for a couple of hours or a day before you reread and edit it. This way, you can look at it with “fresh eyes”, allowing you to be a bit more objective when proofing your first draft.

Ideally, you want to print out your first draft, so you can annotate it as you go. But that is not always convenient and it’s certainly not environmentally friendly. Using track changes on a Word, Pages, or Google Doc will also work.

No matter your method, you’ll want to keep track of your changes and, perhaps, demonstrate to your teachers that you’ve employed an editing process.

To proofread and edit your response:

  1. Reread the essay.
  2. As you read:
    1. Underline any sentences that don’t make sense.
    2. Circle any pieces of grammar that are incorrect.
    3. Check for proper comma and apostrophe usage.
  3. Think about the order of the information you’ve presented. Ask yourself, “Does this make sense? Is this logical?” Don’t be afraid to make dramatic changes and consider rearranging the paragraphs or ideas in your response.
  4. Consider whether you find your essay convincing. Ask yourself, “Do I present ideas in a manner that shows my expertise and insight?”
  5. Think about how you could improve your writing by including a figurative device or rhetorical technique.
  6. Make notes about what you think is effective in your writing.
  7. Make notes about what you think could be more effective or insightful about your response.

Be objective about your writing.

Often, it’s hard to separate ourselves and our feelings from the things that we produce.

This can make it difficult to give an honest judgement of what works and what doesn’t. Do your best to be as objective and critical about your work as you can.

Once you’ve finished proofing and editing your work you’re ready to use these notes and edits to write your second draft.

 

Step 8: Write a second draft based on your notes and edits

You should write a second draft from the beginning rather than editing an existing document.

Rewriting sounds like a lot of work, doesn’t it? But it’ll be worth it.

Why?

Rewriting drafts from scratch will always improve the quality of the writing. Because you’re not simply working with sentences already on a page but, rather, rewriting them, you will be more inclined to change them and make them better.

What do I mean?

Do you ever look at a sentence in a Word document that you’re editing and say to yourself, “I know I should change that sentence, but I really like it so I’m going to make it work?”

A lot of people do, but it’s a bad habit to get into.

Rewriting your second draft from a blank page will make you less inclined to hang onto sentences that may seem nice to you, but aren’t great at conveying your ideas. In addition, rewriting your essay will make it easier to include new rhetorical devices and literary techniques, rearrange things, and make large structural changes.

Don’t hesitate to use the drafting process as a way to experiment with your writing and make it better.

 

Step 9: Third draft and submission

What do I do once I’ve got a second draft of my discursive essay?

If you must, you can submit your second draft. Ideally, though, you should try and get a second opinion.

How should you do this?

Maybe you can run it by a friend or family member. Matrix students get feedback from their teachers and workshop tutors to help them develop their drafts. If you approach your schoolteacher politely, they might give you some feedback if the task allows for it.

The drafting process doesn’t have to finish with the 3rd or, even, the fourth draft. You should keep refining your work to make sure it is as good as it can possibly be. Band 6 results don’t just miraculously appear, they are developed over time.

Once you have a draft you’re happy with, you’re to SUBMIT!

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