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Annotated high-scoring response.
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How much does this annotated response cost?
It’s completely free! We’ve designed this resource to help Year 12 students like you understand what makes a high-scoring VCE English Section B response. If you’re looking to improve your storytelling, structure, or engagement with the stimulus, this guide is can help—at no cost.
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Will this improve my English marks?
Yes, it can! This resource shows you what a high-scoring creative response looks like, breaking down the structure, style, and how it engages with the stimulus. By studying the annotations and practising the techniques, you can improve your creative writing and boost your Section B scores.
Will this teach me how to write a creative piece?
While this guide isn’t a lesson on creative writing, it provides a clear example of how to craft a top-scoring response. It can also give you inspiration for your next creative writing task.
How do I use this annotated essay?
Use this resource as a guide to see what makes a high-scoring creative response. Read the annotated example carefully, paying attention to the structure, use of language, and connection to the stimulus. Then, apply these techniques to your own writing. Use it to practise, compare, and improve your creative responses—it’s a great tool to refine your skills and stand out in your exam!